Tuesday, September 16, 2008

untitled Fanfic : Chapter 1

(Disclaimer: Don't own any of the Megaman stuff...I gotta put this here...-_-)


__A sense of relief and satisfaction swept over Rito like a wave crushing the shoreline. He forgot about his fatigue and literally skipped through the shin-high snow. Kira shouted something at him, but he was too engrossed in getting to his destination that he couldn't hear her warning. The weeping tree branch, which was cut out of his vision because of the snowfall, clocked him square in the forehead. Slumping over into the white sea, the last thing Rito heard were is sister's cries.

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__It was bright; Rito's dream that haunted him. All he could make out were gastly, shadowy figures in the brilliant, blinding light. Suddenly, the six figures surrounded Rito, and the one across from him spoke, "Is this child really the one?" The voice was a little hoarse and commanding

__One to his left answered, "Of course it is...X has ever been wrong. We can trust his decision." This one's voice was a females and she had a soft tone. The previous shadow scoffed. Rito's mind was racing with thoughts, but his mouth was mute when he opened it.

__Another figure, to his right this time, stepped forward. "Hmm...he is the one, so I shall explain all to him." There was a gravity in his voice, but it was still serene. The shadow continued, "Yuuski Rito...we, the six guardians now, beg of your assistance. A merciless evil has appeared in the near future, and we are helpless to stop it. You are him: you are our hope, our pride, and our chosen one. We are ancient beings from the past, but our spirits live on without our bodies. Our powers are hidden. You are to find them...your friends will be a great strength, so be aware of them. Your enemies will come in great masses, and there is a greater one above them." The voice paused and drew in a long breath followed by a deep sigh. "Yuuski, please do not disappoint us."

__Just as quick and soundless as Rito had appeared there, he was gone. His mind fell into darkness, thoughtless darkness. After some time a voice could be heard. It was feminine...and familiar to Rito. Finally, he could make out what it was saying, "Please..." The voice continued begging. "Rito, please...wake up." He now recognized it, and even through the shrill with sobs inbetween words.

__"Kira!!" Rito shouted as he snapped and rose from his slumber.


(Wow, I really hate writing foreshadowing chapters, and so early on too. Hope this doesn't ruin it for some of you. Thanks for reading.)

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Foreshadowing? That sounds terrible! D: Or awesome! :D

squirrelhero said...

Well, make up your mind there KVD.

So, is it fine?

avideogameplayer said...

<_<

>_>

Interesting, to say the least...

squirrelhero said...

Well, you comented at least avgp.